1-Not only does she look healthy, but also she is in great
shape.
2-The doctor wanted to find out why Linda was underweight in
addition to her blood sugar level.
3-Following a regular program of exercise is more beneficial
for me in contrast to being on a fad diet.
4-What i like best about my fitness center are the modern
Lifecycle machines as well as a beautiful Olympic size swimming pool.
5-Jim is both healthy and athletic
6-Frank decided to join a fitness center, not only because
of his son’s persistence but also he wanted to lose 10 pounds.
7-When Richard realized that his eating habits were the
cause of his illness, he began to plan his meals both more conscientiously and
carefully.
8-Julian decided to try a homeopathic treatment;
furthermore, he changed his diet.
9-Shari really enjoys ocean kayaking in addition to going
hiking in the desert.
10-This is a combination of vitamins that build up the
immune system; moreover, they prevent infection from spreading.
Dear Cennet,
YanıtlaSilIt seems that you are good at parallel sentences. Keep up the good word. However, the following items need fixing:
Item 2: .... why Linda was underweight and why her blood sugar level was low.
Item 4. the verb in the sentence should be singular (the formal usage).
5. Item 6: ... not only because of his son"s persistence but aso because of his wish tolove 10 points.